Prompt Analysis · Period 3
6 students are off prompt and need a redo before drafting.
Grade 5 · Period 3
24 of 26 submitted
Not started: Dylan H., Rosa V.
Pull these first
6 students
Off prompt: writing about the wrong thing
Their thesis is about the fireflies or Grandma, not the mason jar’s meaning. On topic, but not on prompt. They will lose the most points if they draft as-is.
ZRZoe R. · fireflies
PKPriya K. · Grandma
NSNadia S. · fireflies
HMHannah M. · bedtime
LGLuis G. · Grandma
LTLayla T. · fireflies
Also reteach before drafting
8 students
Set up to write the wrong kind of essay
They tagged this informational prompt as argumentative. The verb is Explain, not Argue, so they are building a persuasive essay for a prompt that asks them to explain.
MBMarcus B.
TWTyler W.
JDJamal D.
BHBrandon H.
OPOwen P.
DCDevin C.
DMDiego M.
CVCarlos V.
Thesis depth
How many reasons made it into the thesis
60 reasons
101 reason
62 reasons
23+ reasons
fewer reasonsstronger thesis →
16 students wrote a single-reason thesis or none at all. A one-reason thesis gives the body paragraphs nowhere to go. Push each of them for a second reason before they draft.
If this class drafted today
Projected ECR score
A directional estimate from prompt and thesis quality, not an official score.
Not yet
Developing
On track
Strong
Ready to draft now: Aiden L. and Sofia A. have an on-prompt, two-reason thesis. Everyone in the bottom two bands can still move up before a word is written.
Sample report with hypothetical class data. Projected scores are directional estimates from pre-writing signals, not official STAAR scores.